作文指导
A. 表示观点对比类写作套语
v 总起:
Different people hold different opinions.
Opinions are divided.
People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards …
People have different opinions on this problem.
People take different views on this question.
v 表达观点一:
…of them hold the opinion that ….
…of them are in favor of the idea that…
People who are for/against the idea think …
v 表达不同观点之间的衔接:
v However, …of them hold a different view. / …of them hold the opposite opinion.
v People who are against it don’t think so.
v However, each coin has two sides.
v Different from those…., …people think ….
v On the other hand, … people object that ….
当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影,有人则喜欢读原著。请你以“Film or book, which do you prefer?”为题,按照下列要点写一篇英语短文:
1、 看电影:省时、有趣、易懂 2、 读原著:细节更多、语言优美
3、 我的看法及理由:文章题目和开头已给出(不计入词数)。
2、参考词汇: original work 或 book in the original (原著)
Film or book, which do you prefer?
Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow.
Some others have just the opposite opinion. They think that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.
Personally, I agree with the second view. Actually I have more reasons for it. I think I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and what's more, I am able to better understand the author's ideas. In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.
B. 表示今昔对比类写作套语
1. 开头常用句型
(1) Great changes have taken place.
Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the last five year.
Quite a few changes have taken place in my school since you left China.
Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life.
(2) Things have begun to improve since…
自从……以来,事情有了好转/改善。
Things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load.
2. 对比常用句型:
(1)…used to…, but now…
过去常……,但是现在……
(2) …in the past, but now…
在过去……,但是现在……
(3) once…, but now…
曾经…….,但是现在……
(4) Things are different now.
情况已大不同了
(5) But now, everything has changed.
但是现在全变了
阅读下列图表,以“Changes in the Ways People Spent Their Holidays”为题,写一篇词数为120左右的短文。
注意:1 短文的首句已给出,不计入总数;2 可根据图表信息,适当发挥。
Changes in the Ways People Spent Their Holidays
The ways people spent their holidays have changed greatly recently.
In 2002,35% of people spent their holidays at home. The number dropped greatly to 10% in 2006. It seems that people have more time and more money to enjoy the outside world than before.
The graph shows that the number of people spending their holiday traveling abroad increased. Compared with 15% in 2002, the rate in 2006 rote to 25 % . Because people now have much more money than before, they can afford to travel abroad , and the rate may continue to rise in the near future.
From the graph we can also see that the number of people going to the seaside remained nearly the same, while the number of people who go camping rose from 10 % in 2002 to 30 % in 2006. The reason may be that people become tired of the city life and want to be close to nature.
C. 表示数据说明类写作套语
文章结构:
Part 1: General idea (conclusion/ tendency )
Part 2 Facts: (to support the idea)
Part 3 Reasons
Part 4 Solutions or personal opinion/suggestions (if needed)
开头常用套语:
The graph (chat , picture ,table )above shows that …
As is shown by the graph / in the chart, …
From the graph / chart above, we can see …
From the figures given in the table, it can be seen / noticed that…
数据说明常用套语:
The number of … nearly doubled
The number was 5 times as much as that of..
It rose from …
It decreased twice than that of 1906.
The total number was lowered by 10%.
Compared with 1997, it fell from 15 to 10%.
The number of … amount to/add up to/sum up to/reach … (数量总计)
…increase (rise / fall / drop) from …to )
Compared with … …make up about …
原因说明常用套语:
v There are several reasons that account for it.
v A number of factors account for ...
v The change in.... largely results from the fact that...
v Firstly/ First of all/ To begin with, .... Secondly, .... Besides/ In addition/ Furthermore/ Moreover,... Finally/ Last but not least/, ....
v This is because …. That is why ….
v The reason for …. is that….
结尾常用套语:
We can draw the conclusion that…
In my opinion/Personally, …
As far as I’m concerned, …
In short/ in brief/ in a word, …
It seems clear that …
It’s clear from the chart that…
We can know/learn that…
The results seem to suggest that…
1.最近,你校参加了某英文报纸正在开展的题为“中学生课堂注意力”的专栏讨论,并请你代表学校给该英文报纸投稿。下面的图表为你校的调查结果(图中数据为学生人数百分比)。请你根据所提供的信息做简要说明,并根据提示给出改善的建议。
改善注意力的建议:
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教室 |
通风、明亮 |
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课堂 |
积极参与课堂活动 |
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课间 |
适量活动或适当休息 |
Our school has made a survey about how long middle school students can fix their attention in class during each period. The result shows that only 40% of the students can draw their attention to the class, while the rest of them can not concentrate on the lesson. 30% of the students think the problem is caused by all kinds of noises in the classroom; the other part of students consider the lack of sleep and tiredness as the major causes.
Therefore, we advise that the classroom be bright and the air inside stay fresh. As for students, they should try their best to be active in class in order not to be disturbed by others. During the breaks, they can take some exercises or have a little rest in the classroom.
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假如你是南通市长江中学的学生会主席,在6月30日观看了教育部有关安全的电视片以后,结合自己学校的情况,请你用英语写一篇发言稿,谈谈“建平安校园”的重要性.短文要包括下面的内容:
1.增强安全意识;
2.在各项运动中要注意运动安全;
3.注意校内外安全;
4.在同学间遇到矛盾时,一定要冷静,理智;
5.把“建平安学校”的活动转化为全体师生的实际行动。
注意:
1.不要简单翻译所给要点;
2.可适当发挥;
3.字数150左右。短文中己写好了的部分,不计入词数.
Dear friends:
The programs, which we just watched, are beneficial to all of us. We know how to survive earthquakes, big floods and so on. There is no denying that the security deserves our attention. As a student, ____________________________________________________________
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参考答案:
The programs, which we just watched, are beneficial to all of us. We know how to survive earthquakes, big floods and so on. There is no denying that the security deserves our attention. As a student, we should do our best to achieve the goal of making our school campus safe.
Therefore we should realize that we cannot do anything well without the awareness of security. We should pay more attention when doing sports. Do not go to playground to do exercises like swing and double bars all by yourself. Besides, we should attach importance to the safety both inside and outside the campus. Moreover, when getting into trouble with our classmates, we should remain calm and report it to the teachers.
In my opinion, all the students and teachers should work hard and creatively to put the “making our campus safe” activity into practice. On the other hand, we are supposed to follow the law and discipline and take every opportunity to make our school safe.
Our school is our own home to study at. Here in safety, we can enjoy a peaceful and happy life, making everything in harmony.